Lil too suspensful for me at the beginning, not much happening wish there was more for atleast the first 50 seconds. Came in with some background synth but then stopped, a little TOO ambient atm. 2:50 no need to go softer there, already too ambient atm and soft... shoulda gone louder or something. 3:45 need more happening there, it's like I'm not even listening to anything : /. No need for a soft outro either, many things to work on here but many things sound nice too. Thanks for postin!