I wish the bass was a tad quieter.
The leading bass melody is rather cool at first, but after a while (around 6 repeats) I found myself wanting to hear the wonderful choral sounds more clearly.
I'd personally much prefer it if that bass was reduced in volume quite a bit (and also maybe the grinding part of the beat slightly).
It loops really well and there's loads going on the background - it just frustrates me that I can't hear it properly.
Still definitely one of the better tracks on the NGAP. The sweeping notes and choral sounds are - at times - beautiful.
That IS a pretty nice bass, though to be honest I felt it didn't really belong with the rest of the instruments. I mean you've got all these silky smooth instruments, flute, choir, pad, and then you've got this mean angry dirty bass down there making fun of all their mothers!
It's too bad, because I really did want to see this song completed, it looks done for the most part, but it held some crazy power.
It fits perfect with the whole ambiance scene. Did you intend the bass to pan like that? I felt it was a tad distracting, and ambiant music isn't supposed to distract?
In any case, good jorb!