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Feb 19, 2017 | 2:09 PM EST
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9.3 MB
4 min 4 sec
3.00 / 5.00

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Rated 3.00 / 5 stars
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The one that is different...
Now this is something good (and epic) from me.
Please leave a review if you want to share your thoughts about it ! It's always a joy to discover someone's constructive critic on something ! =)
Plus I really went beyond my own capabilities this time !
This was made on GarageBand in... uh... 12 hours ? (I don't know)
Enjoy ! <3



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Writing this as I listen so I'll give an overall conclusion at the end.

From 00:29 to 00:57 I think the piano melody gets a bit too repetitive. It's a shame given how the melody before (and after) that is so much more interesting rhythmically.

The synths that come in around 02:20 are really nice at broad, out of all the instruments you use here they're probably my favourite.

I like the progression of the drums a lot as the piece builds to 03:07, but again you've got the problem of that repetitive rhythm in the strings and piano until about 03:35. I think that varying the rhythm, even just a little bit, would seriously improve the piece.

Overall though, nice job! It has a nice structure and overall mood. Honestly I wish you used something other than Garageband because I feel like you're at the level where it would benefit you, but that's not an objective fault so I won't criticise it. Maybe in your next work try playing around with drawing out the strings as opposed to using them for stabs.

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MysteriousPresence responds:

Hey thanks for the review Kalv' ! =D
Thank you for the kind words ! I really see what you mean by the repetitiveness of the song, I totally see it now with hindsight. I won't do the same mistake again ! ^^
Yes I think I might buy a Windows one day in order to use FL Studio.
Thanks again ! =3


Rated 5 / 5 stars

I really like it the mixing is great!

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MysteriousPresence responds:

Hey thanks Dovy ! ;)


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Beautiful piano simple and beautiful and the drums <3

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MysteriousPresence responds:

Roh u
luv u
You should take a look to the Audio Forum, fans are waiting for you there ! :p


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Really love the piano and everything else that makes it awesome. Love it

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MysteriousPresence responds:

Thanks mate, I really appreciate it ! ;)