Very nice filter on the bass synth in the beginning, it gave it that nice "I'm gonna build up and be awesome later on in the song". The drums you used are very high ended though; they really could use some good, thick bass, you know?
Other than that, you've got yourself a good track! Keep doin' what you're doing!
Can you stop by me and my friends audio page and review the song "Vampires Dream"? Heres a link:
See ya later, and good luck!
I liked Fathom Better
Dont cut your music out so much. It makes it sound weird. Have a nice little transition here and there to make it feel nice and BTW, your drums were 4/4 then kinda changed to 4/6/8 making it not sound right. Just lettin you know. And the synth was great.
Keep goin with this.