Sure, if I have some leftover time :)
Mmmmm.... this has the foundations of something that could be really special, providing it's not repetitive. It could have complimentary orchestral brought to the fore after the intro, then a fade out outro of the intro? Just my thoughs :)
Thanks for the honest review :)
Next time, I'll try to spice up the song using various instruments
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.