Oh? What game is this for? Well it sounds like WAYYY cool, so much different than your other stuff (but in a good way of course :]) I really like the two little sections at the end with that piano and stuff, awesome. I honestly can't think of advice on what to improve on in this song ... so good job!
Thanks! The game is probably going to be on gamejolt one of these days. It kind of depends on when I get my wifi back and don't have to upload my stuff at school