Agree on the drums complaints with the guy below. Kick needs more snap on the begining and needs louder shakers. The guitar is very nice. I could help with this but not for free.
This song has great ideas, no doubt. You lose a star however because of the drums. The drums are a little weak and the lack of sound FX emphasizes this. This song would've been perfect with better drums. Overall, really good job and keep it up! :)
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