This song sounds cool, I see where you're going for but the mix needs a lot of work. The rhythm guitars are hella low and need to be boosted up and panned hard left and hard right. As well as the drum toms too they seem to sit in the middle of the mix and are a little too dry. The lead solos have a little too much highs/mids in them and kind of hurt my gay ears hahaha.
I like the way the strings sound. The vocals are a little weak and I feel they shouldn't be panned hard right and left and kept more in the middle with the blend of the highs and lows and the clean vocals sound good as well just kind of hard to make out what she is saying. I would say get a gear upgrade and start tracking real guitars and get a better drum sound and daw to work with and you'll be set! Invest in a solid guitar processor! I'm not a fan of vst plug ins for guitars but that's my opinion hahaha. Overall cool song but does need a lot of work and a lot more umph to it.