Lovely leading melody. I think of flying(&water).
I enjoyed the distorted voice at the start, although it sounds like he's saying 'Wake up my friend!'.
I think it could use some louder punctuations at the start if it's meant to be a tune for use for waking folk up.
I do love the simple melody that carries the whole piece. Beats are great and I like the notes of the kinda 'electriccy' instrument, though it got slightly grating for me.
It's probably not meant for use as a loop, but it loops moderately well too.
I'm saddened to hear this won't be finished. With a bit more diversity and a better looping (maybe by starting with the melody in place alone?) it'd kick ass in a game about flying. Or maybe a fast-paced puzzle game with soft pastelly colours.
Or maybe just now, it could work well in a rhythm-based game where it runs for a single loop?
You have a great talent for peaceful, gentle melodies. This tune remind me of flying, stars, water, rainfall, rainbows, birds and other soft and gentle things.
the music is really good, but the voice is crap!!!!
A new piece eh! So soon too. Excellent.
I like what you did with your voice in this song at the beginning. It was a little hard to make out what you were saying, and I felt it was a tad loud, but it got the point across, and this time I felt it didn't clash with the song in any way.
The song's melody itself was just great. It was pushing, it was energetic, and it kept going. The panned reversed sounds were interesting, but I felt they were used in too much abundance, especially at the end where they were hitting some pretty high notes.
I'm a little sad to hear this won't be finished. This song really holds a ton of potential in my eyes.
When your voice goes all opera like at the end, that was priceless! I loved it, really gave some good energy.
The instrumentation is also down right, it all sounds like it belongs, it's just those reversed sounds that I think you used in too much.
Overall, great track! Try to get this one done if you can >:(!!! This one easily gets a 5/5 from me.
why thank you! But, ummm, that was my friend singing at the begginning. =(
Anyways, i appreciate your input again!