FIIIIIIRST! so i can't put my finder on what feels lacking hmm, production is really good, chords are really good, melody is really good... hmmm everything is good. BUT what i'd say is melody kinda lacks an urge to go anywhere, melody is kinda like "hOI i'm a melody and i want to stay where i am" what would fix it is if you guys would add more "tension" which is just some more dissonance notes in betweed the chord notes (what the hell did i just say wow) BASICALLY i could be wrong but it feels like the melody is written only with the chord notes and therefore it feels veeery stable, to the point where it feels like the melody is lazy and doesn't want to go anywhere, please don't kill me this is just my opinion!!! WAAAAA!
if you still wish to kill me please don't kill me too hard otherwise i might die, and i don't like dying
but overall 9/10
why da hell you don't have more views then :/
we gotta fix it
LMMS bro :v