I think you have the start of a great song. There are good ideas in here, but as a whole, I can't say I like it very much.
The first 30 seconds is not too interesting, but I was curious to see where that idea would go. I think the sparse piano and drums is a cool style and it has room to expand into something pretty dope. Then the drums started a double-time thing and I was a little surprised, but not much because changing the groove of your song isn't illegal or anything. However that lasted for only 15 seconds and you switched up the groove to half-time again. This struck me as awkward and unnecessary.
Once the build-up ended and the beat began, I was really surprised at how awesome it became. The difference between the intro and beat is quite stark, The use of horns and synths were unique and I loved that awesome sound at 1:20.
However, this kick-ass beat lasts for only 30 seconds, then the song goes back for another full minute of that awkward piano and drum beat that changes from half-time to double-time and back again.
If I were to improve on this song, I would decrease the length of the intro by half by removing the double-time part from :30 to :45 and starting the build-up right there. I would do that same to the second half of the song.
Like I said, there are some awesome ideas in this song. Its just that the intro and middle bits dragged on too long and were relatively uninteresting and sparse.
I look forward to hearing more from you. Never stop creating.
Thanks, i know this is kind of bad since im not really that good at FL Studio, but my next song will be pretty good (in my opinion).
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