If You Where Mine Ft. Flame The Odyssey X The Kid Griff

Author Comments

This song is just one of the many types of style i love to do. hip hop is so spread out that i just cant stay on one thing. LIKE COMMENT AND SHARE!! I would love some feed back if anyone is willing to give it. Enjoy


This would be lit -- if the mixing were better. Can sound a little cliche at points, but had good pacing and phrasing. Acapella sounds dry. Needs some chorus, compression, a little noise cancellation if the noise is noticeable (make sure to find an absolutely silent point to select, then render the track again and see how it sounds, because live cancellation will sound like shit).

Actual beat could use a little more attention paid to it. We have a lot of high end with virtually no low end, and the kick sounds a bit weird. The dry vocals make it sound even stranger in terms of soundscape. Just sounds very naked.

If you're interested in more tips and thoughts, let me know. Tbh I can't tell from this whether you're on Ableton or Cubase.

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Credits & Info

3.00 / 5.00

Feb 3, 2017
9:17 AM EST
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
3.2 MB
2 min 49 sec

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