For how long you've been doing this you're not too bad.
Don't be afraid to put some modulation on your instruments, it would be nice to hear some of the instruments evolve into something else as they are playing. You can do this to foreshadow drops or just make an interesting synth. Also using sidechaining (definitely a technique you should look up on yourtube or something) on your instrumental bus is usually good for letting the attack percussion through.
Everyone starts somewhere, I was soo much worse when I was your age. Keep at it!
thanks for the feedback, Ill take into account next time :D
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