Sounds kind of empty to me, with or without the vocals. Still, it has a good melody and the instruments used portray it well. 4/5.

Now that is better! But not just better:

PERFECT

As I wasted my review in the another version of the song, Im going to write my opinion here.
This song is just amazing. Keep it up. If it had some mistakes, I would tell, but you eved added the vocal version and the non vocal version, so both vocal and non vocal fans can be happy listening to your jam ^^ Im totally hyped about that toeIII and Electrodinamix II

I really love your music Nate. The thing is, you keep reusing old sounds in your music. I mean I kinda like it, you make nice melodies. But its kind of getting old.. Other than that, nice song man!

Also if you haven't heard, theres been some changes with newgrounds and Geometry Dash..
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1419782
http://robtopgames.com/blog/2017/02/01/geometry-dash-newgrounds/

btw, holy mother of fuck

This is amazing! I was honestly sad that you stopped uploading music,but now you are back,and i found all the previous songs you just posted! Keep it up,and i hope you will keep uploading more! :)