Not so bad...
...i liked the guitars when they first came in and I would stick to them mostly, kinda Chemical Brothers theme like.
was a bit slow, the beginning seemed really stretched out. not a bad build up at the end, but, like the other guy said, it need more umfph to it, to be a great song. was still pretty good tho, you kept a good beat through the whole song, mixed up your intruments well, and it was smooth. keep it up eh.
Keep at it
It was lacking, lacking in stucture. When you do build-ups, people what something to come out of them, not just to keep going on nothing. This was good, but need a bit more oumph (or how ever its spelt) Anyway, keep at it.
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I know what you mean, Im not sure
you listened to the whole song,
The ending is more or less the payoff,
I didn't think it was too bad there.
anyway, Ill submit the song I did origionally Made, "Diplomatic" To show a bit more structure.... It was made first after all.