I liked it. Good for your first attempt I guess. I suggest u keep at it so you'll get better. I've gone through many styles of techno to make what I make today, so you just got play around till ur good at making wat u wanna make. A suggestion would be make the beat distinct and more often. Otherwise it just sounds like ambient sounds. Unless u dont want people to dance
i know its hard to go outside the norm.. like, if you're sed to making hip hop, its hard to make a good techno song.. i think this is pretty good, not really techno though.
more of ambient... kinda?? iono.
keep at it!
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