I'm no music expert, but this is great.
lol tyvm m8 xD
I like the tranquil mood at the beginning. It has a spacey yet minimalistic vibe. It's a little slow to progress, but has a bright tone and a good sense of rhythm. I think you overdid the reverb/distortion with that instrument at 1:14. The melody is nice and calming, but the synth itself sounds very in-your-face. I also think it's just too loud. It drowns out the harmonies and chords. The whole piece lacks a lot of texture in my opinion. I just would've liked to see some pads or something fill in the mid-range frequency space for most of this thing. The chordal instruments you have in there now are very pizzicato-y, such as at 3:03. This works well for breakdowns and bridges, but your piece could have a lot more energy and drive if you come up with some notes that are held out longer. I thought you could've had a more creative ending too. Fade-outs are generally pretty underwhelming. Otherwise, I like the piece. It's well-structured and smooth-flowing, and also quite catchy despite its slow pace. Keep at it, man. ;)
This is nice! :) I really like the piano melody, it sounds very clean along with the cool beats. The instrument at 1:13ish does seem to 'grab the mic' just a bit, not sure if it's too much delay or reverb effect or maybe because I'm wearing headphones listening to this. :) But there's a lot of great stuff going on here! Keep it up and thanks for sharing!^^
hmm...lol i didnt even notice the part on 1:13 until ya mentioned it i can tweak it a bit ty m8!
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