The attack is a bit slow on the strings pad synth (second synth that comes in). I do love that synth though, very reminiscent of old N64 games. I don't think the first synth blends with it well though. I feel this needs more layers and such, Zelda is a good example to learn from. And Chrono Trigger.
It's a bit too repetitive though, needs more variation, but overall the melody is a nice start just needs more layers and the synths needs slightly better mixing, but overall the mix feels empty. Almost there, just need to add that percussion, more variation, and more background instruments. Keep it up! Thanks for participating!
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