You seem to always come up with the interesting pieces with just about all sorts of unique sounds, but thats what makes this interesting, nice loop here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a faster build up or tempo from the start.
Best track ( of yours ) so far. Would fit in nicely in a metal gear solid themed flash or similar. Great melody, keep up the great work!
For one, the introduction is very unique. =) You could have built on that very nicely for something professional-sounding, but the synth you introduce a moment later ruins the feeling. But let's see how the rest of this song goes.
You've got some very strange and unique melodies going on here. That's going to guarantee your effort score a 10 - however, your other scores are questionable. You don't change much up to the song - I see the same elements used again and again. You could have done more work on this. If you do this song correctly, though, it coul be a masterpiece. ;)
Why don't you stop by and review my stuff if you have time? Especially my two latest, Gunshot and Dark Storms at Sea. Much appreciated, and hope I helped. =)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.