I feel it could be slightly louder, mixing needs a tiny bit of work, making things blend a little better,the synths and percussion sound a bit too separated in the mix if that makes sense. I like the elements here, but I probably would even replace the kick, it sounds too...thumpy. like hitting a cardboard box. Other than that, this is a pretty song, great job.
Thanks. I agree with your comments about the volume and the mixing.
I kind of understand what you mean by the synths and the percussion sounding too separated. The synth sounds more retro-ish while the percussion is more modern.
I also agree on your view with the kick.
And a Happy 2nd Pixel Day to you, too~!
Okay, so I went super retro with my track, but you. . . y o u . . . did this! And believe me, I'm not complaining. At all. Because it's a helluva lot of fun to listen to, which comes as no surprise.
Man, that long, slow ritardando at the end is glorious. Love the sound and dig the vibe. Sorry to hear about all the writer's block, omgsuperspeedtotallyrushedgottagofastness, and software issues. Not a one of those things is in any way pleasant, that's for sure.
I've got just one little complaint, and that's the super loud pop right at the tail end of the track. Toss your track in an audio editor and cut that bit off. If it were a loop you'd be up a creek, but you should be able to exorcise the audio demon without too much trouble and update the track. Anyway, I wouldn't feel right taking even half a star away for something like that when it was probably due to a software glitch, and besides--everything else is bonzer!
Thank you so much for the kind words! Love the wording in your review. :P
And also, OH NO I DIDN'T EVEN NOTICE THAT AAAUUUUGGGHHH
Don't worry, though. Already fixed it. I checked the other formats that I sent to stores and stuff and they don't seem to have it, so I think it's just a software bug. Thanks for the heads-up!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.