Not bad, I feel there's just a tiny bit too much reverb, which drowns the instruments a bit. Overal the melody isn't bad, but I feel could use a tiny bit more. Would work good in a game. Keep up the good work. Good mixing.
Thanks for listening.
I get what you mean on the melody side, I focused too much on the rhythm and neglected a bit the rest
I'll fix it all asap.
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