i can't stop of hear this,its awesome
The frantic beat at the beat doesn’t really fit very well with the calming piano riff, and I think the bass at :12 is way too loud. Usually, the melody (which is in the piano) should be louder than the bass and other supporting harmonies. I don’t think the instrumentation here is particularly creative, either. I did enjoy the melodic content, though. The effects at 1:34 sounded a bit out-of-place. I think you should’ve primed the listener a bit by including them earlier in the piece if you wanted them to be so exposed at 1:34. The section at 2:02 does offer a good sense of structural relief, though. Some of the filtering work you did (e.x., 2:28) was a little cheesy IMO, but overall the piece is both well-structured and smooth-flowing. Compositionally, this is a strong piece, although I did take off some points because of the balance issues and instrumentation. Keep at it, man!
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