The baseline and snare at the start are too loud. All the sounds, with the exception of the percussion, need to be smoothed over a little bit, they sound to sharp by a small margin. Your variation in the melodies, baseline, and percussion is on-point, good job there. Sorry I'm a bit late for the review, and keep up the improvement. :)
Awesome! I hope you make "Chlorine". :p
Chlorine is 11 songs away xD If I'm doing it in order, I have to get through Nitrogen, Oxygen, Fluorine, Neon, Sodium, Magnesium, Aluminum, Silicon, Phosphorus, and Sulfur first ;A;
In time, it will happen xD
Pretty good. #StillHypedForOganesson
It is progress my dude, and that's what matters.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.