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Jan 14, 2017 | 12:11 AM EST
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9.8 MB
4 min 19 sec
4.75 / 5.00

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Rated 4.75 / 5 stars
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This song... Has a long backstory with another backstory within the backstory so I won't get too in-depth with the backstory; we'll just say this song took a REALLY long time to come to be, and I am so happy to see it finished.

We love you oh Prototonus, you Dark Overlord you...

Instrumental (and 1st half of chorus): Rampant
Prototonus: Fats
Screechy-Voiced Metal Guy: Teqneek

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I have come to devour
From my ivory tower
I will take your first born daughter
And have her bear my son
My heir
I will slay the weak
And any who oppose me

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Master of Pain, the Emperor of Darkness
Deathbreather, eater of he who seeks knowledge
Seven realms, and six have fallen
One final day to appease Prototonus

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Prototonus devoured heaven//
He rules our realm and there's no protection//
Your mortal weapons, bring only sorrow//
We must appease Him to see tomorrow//

Prototonus You reign with might//
We offer You humble sacrifice//
Cats and goats, sons and daughters//
Slashed in the throat to appease Prototonus//

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You will obey me
And rue my name
Form the sigil with your blood
It doesn't matter I will still consume your galaxy
I am Prototonus and
Your suffering fuels me

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He reaches you, within your dreams
He speaks to you, eternal sleep
Seven realms, and six have fallen
Their insolence shall not be forgotten

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Rated 4 / 5 stars

Excellent writing. Could really use better mixing on vocals and delivery. Track FX are your friend, specifically reverb and chorus, and compression. Then, proper leveling. Then you don't have to be right up on the mic to get a good sound and volume. Also, falsetto sounds a bit weak and lacking passion/power. Instrumental is a little too loud and sounds like it's distorting at points. This one could go back to the drawing board in terms of mixing. But it was interesting enough I wanted to hear it out to the end, and written well.

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Teqneek responds:

WOW that was super critical...
Yeah we kinda just wanted to know if you like the song.

Also about 90% of what you recommended we do- was already done. We are well aware of what vocal effects are, and Rampant is a talented composer/producer who employed the tactics he deemed fitting.

If anything- MY part is the only real weak point, and maybe I'll re-record it some day but I'm actually pretty happy with this overall. So yeah. Thank you for the review though; we're just not looking for people to talk to us like it's our first rodeo and I'll leave it at that haha...


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Kings among men...

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Teqneek responds:

Thank you!