Very nice, although I feel like it should had built up a little more slowly, to yet another layer of melody, just for a little bit, and then slowly peal the layers off and wind down. Just my humble opinion, for an effort of constructive criticism; perhaps I'm too regularized by 8-bitnation.org and listening to this format. I did listen to it three times at least sooo yeah, good job mate. Ima sit here and drink more beer, producing nothing.