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Far Away

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This is mixed style song with female vocals,this was ment to be my first single but never went public.
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BANDCAMP:
https://tenodiboris.bandcamp.com/track/far-away
YOUTUBE:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6h3pwXMh3MQ&feature=youtu.be
SPOTIFY:
https://open.spotify.com/artist/25Pk57a87b5NStRxFyTv7p?si=DxdoQywKTGOHGfSmNvBEEg

here are the lyrics:

In a certain way Im waiting the day
Im gonna say it to you
I know you know
We are destined to lose there is nothing to choose

When I close my eyes I can see only lies
crouching in me and you
I know you know
we are destined to choose there is nothing to lose

so run far away

Just tell me do you see
how things are gonna be indulge me
Im tiered of this love
its simply not enough
indulge me

everything is turning gray and you are pulling away there is nothing to say

i know you know
there is nothing to say and your not gonna stay
questions going around leaving me like a child falling deep in denial

so run far away

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epic, your best work, my 5th favorite song ever!

I like the dreamy, pensive vibe at the beginning and the smooth vocals. I like the lyrics, too. Did you write them yourself, or are the vocals sampled from somewhere? The production quality is smooth, even if there’s a bit too much reverb in the texture at times. I like the sense of climax into 1:10, but I think the piece never quite got to the cathartic melodic moment I was hoping for. The lead at 1:24 sounds very in-the-chords, and overall I think you missed an opportunity to maximize the emotional appeal of the piece with a soaring melodic section or emotional bridge. The closest you come to doing that is at 2:07, but it’s at a bit of a strange spot in the arrangement, towards the very end. At the very least, I would’ve created a more distinct outro here and fleshed out the composition just a tad more. This piece is short enough that you had some time to work with in terms of creating more emotional contrast in this piece. Still, the production is solid, the sound design is cool, and the atmosphere is really languid and pleasant. Keep at it, TenodiBoris! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1.25/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.75/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
8.5/10

TenodiBoris responds:

Yes I did write the lyrics for the song, and also hiered singer and did the recordings, it was nice experience for me. Thanks for the review :)

Awesome material

The vocals are awesome. Production quality is, needless to say, fantastic. Song is very gripping and there's enough variation to keep it fresh.

Great stuff!

TenodiBoris responds:

Thank you very much for nuce words 😊

I REMEMBER THIS SONG SINCE GD

TenodiBoris responds:

Yeah, it had it's shine on GD :)

Just amazing.

TenodiBoris responds:

Thank, that means alot coming from you :)

Credits & Info

TenodiBoris
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Downloads
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Votes
185
Score
4.44 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 12, 2017
2:53 AM EST
Genre
House
File Info
Song
6.1 MB
2 min 40 sec

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