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Fire

Author Comments

New future trap song I wanted to share. Let me know what you guys think! Download available on SoundCloud!

https://soundcloud.com/lunarluxury/fire

Reviews


so it's got all the pieces of a really great tune - each individual element sounds really good. but overall i think the instrument mix is a little bloated and a lot of the percs are tinny, like if you did the gain staging the way you wanted it to come across with mastering, but before you actually mastered it - if that makes sense? the kick is having a sad time all the way down there, too :( basically just bring the kick up and the vocals down before you hit that master comp (maybe duck some low/low-mid freqs of the vocal track under the kick and snare too?). the main snare and claps cuts through really nicely though - love that tonal element to the snare layer too.

i'd probably dial back the reverb a little on the vocal, or maybe just shorten the feedback to tighten it up a little - personally i like to use separate short and long reverbs to define the space of the track a bit more. can't fault the composition, really enjoyed the instrumentation and what you're doing with the rhodes especially. would've been good to mix up the transitions/drops/whatever when it kicks back in at 1:50 - cause repeating the first section isn't a bad thing, but you can trick most listeners into thinking it's more different if you change the buildup and drop in a few key areas.

anyway good track, enjoyed it a lot. keep em coming!


Lunar-Luxury responds:

That was probably one of the best feedback comments I've ever received. Also, I agree 110% with what you're saying. After listening to it a million times I definitely could've put together a better mix down I guess I just wanted to have a tune done because I hadn't finished anything in a while. I will certainly work on my mix game and try to make the next songs progressions more interesting. Thank you for the awesome comment I couldn't have asked for a better response :)


sounds great can listen to for hours


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Credits & Info


Listens
228
Votes
2
Score
3.53 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 10, 2017
4:08 AM EST
Genre
Techno
File Info
Song
7.3 MB
3 min 13 sec
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.