never really heard something like this on NG
But nevertheless it was a refreshing piece to listen to.
Obviously you knew what you were intending to do with the song, and the beginning of the shootout was, although seemingly random, pretty important in portraying what you were doing with the melody.
I liked how you had the lone pad/synth playing while everything started up. A fresh new spin on the old western stand-off in my opinion, and I liked that a whole lot!
When the melody started, I got the impression that the person who found himself in that situation really didnt want to be there in the first place, but had to go through it anyway.
It may not be the most complex song I've ever heard, but unlike other people *not trying to point fingers or cut others down* I dont let bias come between me and reviews.
This song in my opinion was very well executed, and painted a wonderful story for me! I have respect for people who put as much effort in their songs as you appear to. Such care and determination usually creates wonderful pieces like this.
This song, is wonderful!
You have my vote for 5.
Good sound effects
Okay so I see your description saying a shootout and I'm thinking you mean a hockey shootout? LOL So anyway I hear the car starting and than gunshots, windows breaking, cops coming and I'm just like what the heck is going on. Than comes in your little melody and I'm like okay here we go. Good stuff coming cause the beginning was just nonsense. By the end of the song I hear a boom and I'm like OHHHH okay I get it. A shootout...some guy in a car trying to escape the cops and later goes boom. Now I get it. The beginning so pointless as I thought. You successfully portrayed a story in your music. I am really really really impressed. Good song..probably one of the best miscellaneous songs I've heard, but than that genre of music isn't my favorite so really my score is a bit biased. I really tried to not be biased at all, but I just can't force myself to like something as much as other genres. Very good song anyway. Plz give me a written review on "A jukebox life (volume up)" which is a dance song. Not sure if you like dance so some bias may occur to..but just give a fair review. I need your support cause on the dance genre there is a blammer who keeps giving all new dance submissions a big fat 0/5 for no reason. He is an absolute jerk so I need your honest review so I can improve on stuff. We can both make suggestions to help eachother make better songs in the future.
heh, wow. I'm speechless to see such a large review.
The original name was going to be "A Bad Day" but that would make no sense either. Yea, sorry about the random start there, I tried to build up the sounds, starting with a car then ending in a car chase thing... anyways.
I'll give you support, but boosting people is not my specialty. I dont rank myself either like I have noticed some people do, they give themselves fives on fresh submissions.
Thanks for the review, it is a rare to see reviews containing over 3 lined paragraphs.
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