Could use a lot more... body. How about some bass and something behind the melody? It just feels so empty with only a lead and what sounds like drums. On top of that, I was expecting something with "contest" in the title to be more hyped sounding. But this is a good start.
And sorry for the useless copypasta review on your other song, by the way.
NP. I've heard a bass would be good. I do see where you're coming from with "contest" complaint, it was just a way I could say "eating tropical fruit" with pizaz.
Though it's a bit repetitive, it's quite catchy. I think you should tone down the drums a bit, and maybe add some bass. A triangle wave would make a great bass here.
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