For a freestyle, it's alright. A little compression on your vocals goes a long way, man.
Unrelated: Where'd you get this beat though? I can't find that instrumental anywhere.
Thanks man and it's Big Sean's Bounce Back remix
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
* Remix of a third-party piece.
Excercise caution when using it, refer to author comments / contact the author for details.