I like the reverb and melodies at the beginning. Nice job with the sidechaining at :30. The piece has a pretty cool progression, but I wish you would've varied the melody more later on. I think you could've done many more creative things (rhythmically) with the drums, and in general some rhythmic variety is lacking in this piece. I understand that this is just a "simple test," but I'd love to see you aim for more harmonic depth in the future. Keep at it, my friend. :)
Really good song! You're an inspiration to me. I really like your songs. Hope they will get even better in future!