I like the suspense and dramatic string part. Even for a game menu, it has very little sense of direction or progression, though. The sound design and mixing are good, but I think you could've done a lot more with this. It doesn't even make that great of a loop because of the little riser effect you have at the beginning. I want to see this turn into a 4-minute thriller! Keep at it, man. ;)
Thanks for the review! I realized after the fact that I had that riser in the beginning (oops). A quick slice and I'll fix that up.
EDIT: Fixed, my bad!