Its all right, the main issue here is probably that for the first 1:15 the melody lead is playing without a single rest, and that sometimes gets boring. Also, at the start, I feel the piano clashes with the melody at times. The last part sounds much better though! Nice work! :D
Thanks! That repetitive part was because I'm not really good at creating a ton of variation that still fits together. It either sounds random and disjointed or too much of the same. Getting there though!