Reminds me a bit of The Big Black lol. I personally really like this track :3 ~S~ (Mostly because I'm a fan of stuff like this)
You had a nice tune, but it's very repetitive. You just repeated it with different sounds. Also, I think a lot of people will agree with me on this one. Extratone is not musical. Like, at all. It's painful to listen to, and layering a melody on top of it doesn't make it better. I know this is a blunt way to put it, but this genre is not a way to get listeners and followers.
Well, you had a good melody! Yes, it indeed was repetitive, but it was a pretty good melody. The mixing wasn't awful either. The bass is good, maybe a little more would help.
Overall, this track has potential, but introducing Extratone absolutely killed the track. I was really enjoying it until you killed my ears. However, this does have potential. I think you should try some other genres though, because you are good at making melodies and general composition as a whole. Sorry if my review is a bit blunt at points. 2.5/5
The thing is I am trying to make extratone enjoyable for everyone. Extratone, that doesn't really kill ears. But still, thanks.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.