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lucasasdf - Drapes

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Just wanted to make another song and try to use dubstep wobbles with Harmless

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Sorry if I seem harsh, he melody is a bit... repetitive. When I say that, I;m not putting it lightly. It's practically the same melody but with other things put over it. If this is one of your first songs, then I can forgive you. If you've been doing this for a while, than you haven't made much good progress. Other than the repetitive melody, it's still an OK song.


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The rhythm at the beginning is a little bizarre - it's almost square, but not quite. When the beat comes in at around :30, it makes a little more sense. I think you overused the reverb on that instrument that plays for the first 30 seconds, though. I'm pretty sure the instrument that comes in at :41 is a preset from Plucked. The whole piece is pretty dissonant, which isn't necessarily a problem, but I think you needed some stronger melodic content in there. The simple riff at 1:31 isn't enough to satisfy my melodic desires for an entire piece. The samples you used are cool. This could turn into a really cool ambient track, but I think it just needs to be fleshed out more. I also thought you could've done a lot more with the drums. There's a lot of potential here. Keep at it, man. ;)


lucasasdf responds:

I admit that I'm not the best at sound design, so when making the GMS Sample that you hear in the beginning I turned the reverb all the way up, and I'm new to making music, I've made music before, but I do it scarcely throughout time, but thanks for the feedback! : )

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lucasasdf
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3.39 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 27, 2016
8:31 PM EST
Genre
Techno
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2.6 MB
2 min 15 sec
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