The song I think is overall pretty good, the chords are pleasing to the ear and has a pretty good sound and bass. I've checked a few of your other songs and I feel like your drops need more impact. That's what I believe is missing most in your songs.
Thanks for the feedback! I am trying to figure out how to make drops more insane, I am getting new plugins soon with new sounds, and I will try to master it. Expect more epic songs coming soon!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.