learn some music theory and learn how to make your mix cleaner. And sidechain please. The song is semi decent. A bit awkward but hey thats ok my first few submissions on here are terrible so. Yeah work on ur mix and melodies. Nice sounddesign btw.
Don't know where to learn music theory, I tried making my mixes better and I will try this sidechain thing. Plus this isn't the generic squeaky and high pitched dubstep I always hear, this is Deathstep (I hope) so it does so sound awkward to you. By the way these are not my first submissions and I have been practicing music for nearly a whole year. Yeah and I will work on my mix and melodies, that's my 2017 plan now.
Thanks as well btw. Sorry if this response seems a bit cocky and rude, I wasn't really expecting this kind of review and was hoping it was more helpful.