I like it.
Look, there's a lot of the shit that's on NewGrounds that suck balls. I mean, it's really really bad and I sort of lose hope for humanity when listening to some of the bullshit.
But I mean, yours.. Yours was. Fair.
To be perfectly clear, this style is nice, and it seems to suit you. Now, you're learning Blazo (thanks for introducing me to that btw, really nice), and that I dig. I want you to practice a lot more on timing.
Precision is a really important concept in music.. it allows the world to twirl, to twist, to turn and disappear. Yes even time itself can suddenly seem timeless. Colors or colorless, that which paints not what the eyes see, but what the soul sees, that is music.
Lovely you, practice will make you brilliant. Take it slow, take it easy or take it however you want to take it, just don't quit.
Yup i literally just got the midi keyboard and controller in yesterday so I made some things. Hopefully it'll get better. I think instead of playing the same thing through like I did here, I'll make smaller loops so its more precises
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.