The piano at the intro was nice though the melody sounded kinda off. I'll reccomend you using some dubstep drums instead of the basic ones. The violin thing was cool too. The drop was repetetive af though the wubs sounded okay at first. The drums got repetetive as well and the drop got boring after a while.
What i'll reccomend:
-add a few more instruments (growls, pads and maybe a few extra chords)
-Make the song less repetetive (create different melodies, and combine more growls at the drop)
-use some drum samples instead of basic drums (it will sound a lot cooler)
-and try to use some reverb and other effects to make the song sound less emptier
I think you are not a bad composer, however you can be alot better.
And you did balance the volume of the instruments pretty well
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