I love the ambient spin on it, but it overall feels, "Fake" if you know what I mean. a bar at a time bass line would have been nicer, because it sounds like it's supposed to have drums but they were removed when you have the bass line done out of quarter notes. However, I love the variety of interests and how you used them together, very clever.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.