Not bad for its short length. I don't know anything about the original, but this was good. It reminds me of a Boom Kitty song. However, if it were longer, I would advise you change up the usage of that "ooh" sound, because it was annoying.
Yeah, I kinda agree with you on that. If I decide to revise it, I'll fix that part first.
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