intro piano doesn't fit that pluck riff much.. overall, the melodies feel a bit random, you should work on your them more... I mean you got some ideas about arrangement and you are making enough variations in the song, but the musical basis just isn't very good right now
it feels like every instrument is panned differently, which is normally a nice way of creating "wide" feeling but you have kinda overdone it here so there's nothing solid left in the middle.. this type of kick should be 100% in the centre (or at least its part below c. 200 Hz)
and I think there should be some solid bass instrument (offbeat bass would fit here I believe), you have only kick's sub bass here, so low end of the spectrum feels empty
hope this helps and good luck with future production :)
and when you want to make a post in the forum with that picture of song, you simply put the link of the song there
I do have a tendency to not follow too much a pattern, I've been told about having a strange style. I have to control that a little. The panning is something I'll work in as well, try to fill everything without crowding it.
I'll take on your bass tip and apply it on the next one.
I appreciate the review, buddy. Thanks for explaining the picture thing too.
Sounds really nice!
Although there are a few sounds that don't fit as well in the song as others (example; the electric guitar) I thoroughly enjoyed listening to this song.
Keep up the good work!
Thanks, for the review!