Your baselines sound a bit better varied than your last song in this one, and the melodies have slightly less variation. Unfortunately the percussion is way too sharp, and hurts my ears... besides the weak kick at the end.
Thank you for taking the time to write these reviews, I really appreciate the feedback. I'm having an issue where a lot of the instruments I use sound louder after being uploaded to NG than when I mixed them in FL Studio; I'm trying to figure out the issue behind this. I focus on a different area in each of these songs, and this one happened to be base lines. Hydrogen was melodies, and Lithium was chord progression, and you accurately pointed that out. I have a lot of things I need to work on in music production, so I figured I'd tackle them each in their element before mixing them. Thank you for acknowledging that, I promise I'll try to have a well-rounded, functioning song by Carbon. ;)
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