First commet in ages
need to improve transitions
Ok well, this is the review, as promised.
This piece has a number of different elements to this.
Most of which don't flow too well, you really need to look into the transitions from one part to the next. As it stands, it sounds like you have a few patterns in this, but together they don't really work too well. It goes from one part and then a sudden change with the next piece,
in fact having heard this play through a few times now, I might have been a little flippant.
There's one part that just sounds completely out of place. The bit that's kind of reminscent of DnB that part doesn't follow on well from the part that came before it.
Well 5/5/ anyway and a download too :)
The song itself has a lot of energy in it tomfitz, but what I see happening is your transitions are non existent, the song moves around too much without any indication of change and let me tell you, that can get dangerous of electronic songs. Most electronic songs I hear have some kind of build up/break down going on, so be sure to make those in the future!
You have good ideas, but your presentation is what is lacking.
Try reverbing those kicks and percussional things, they will sound more realistic and better. Especially the claps. A rule of thumb for me anyways is never use claps without reverb, they sound too rough.
In any case, you are well on your way! Keep up the good fight, and keep em coming!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.