Hey now that's A LOT better!
I like the bassy beat in the beginning, it definitely grabs the attention of the listener. I also like the lead that starts to fades in along with the glitch-like voice clips, it adds more depth to the song. And that riser that leads to the breakdown is also a really nice touch. Overall, this is an amazing song, a whole lot better than your last one, just now try to work on the pacing of your song to make them longer, keep up the amazing work, dude!

-Bow