A lot of love went into this and probably sonded smooth on your in but on my end it sounded like a recording of a radio, very bad audio quality made it the opposite of smooth and relaxing. It felt a little too attention grabbing at times to be a lounging song, and its ending felt forced. Better luck on future projects.
Thank You for your response =)
BAM! P.E.F. WAM! DJ, TIGER M! ^_~*
P.S. And you do mean 'better luck' from DocNik critiques I imagine =)
Thank You for sharing your experience D.N. =) And yes =)
A lot of love did and does -- check your hardware =3 (Earphones?)
Nothing was forced -- Thank you for your audience =) An enjoyable experience received =)