So this was an awesome piece here I the sound and the vocals are pretty good I do think you could add onto the vocals with more twists along the way it would really make this piece a pretty solid one much more then it is it's some nice sound work here I like the vibe of this you have some amazing work and I look forward to more of what you can do this was nice stuff though hope you make more soon
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Some more depth in the vocals
Very good, but the vocals could use some work
This is excellent! Reminds me of so many things. Like a little bit of tool on the instrumentals, with a younger spirited voice. Dope.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.