Not bad, not bad!
It feels like it almost needs a bit more, and as a reference to that submission review; where would someone use this in a submission? this sounds like a mixture of a level and a menu screen, so I can't help but wonder where to put it... but it was great. Don't ever stop; that's my only advice. Keep any songs you don't like; it'll help you learn from your mistakes, which is the key to any success.
...wait, I just said "Don't ever stop" was my ONLY advice, didn't I? Whoops.
Oh, forgot to mention; perfect ending for the song.