Personally, I think at the start you should keep it just to the main melody and slowly layer the tracks as it builds. It does get ever so slightly tedious by the end; try to alter the melodies and beats to create a track with lots of different sections and melodies to keep the listener entranced.
Just my opinion!
Ok. I'll put in some more interesting parts in the build up. I have to say, Vocals would be cool!
Decent but boring. Not much else to say. Nice melody.
I have a new song for Thanksgiving. Maybe you could look at it?
Thanks for the feedback.
I'll have a look at it.