This is awesome for a first song! Here are a few musical tips:
1. Potentially keep the music in the same key signature? The drop switches what I believe seems to be F major before the drop to E major after the drop. If this is *intentional*, then I would definitely suggest having some sort of buildup that introduces the listener to the new key signature.
2. As the other reviewer (the only one at the time of this review) noted, this could really do with some more instruments. I would love to hear some pads or some strings.
3. Some notes sound better than others when mixed with other chords. In each time signature, there is an associated pentatonic scale: in your song, this would be F (low) G A C D F (high). Typically, these notes are good for melodies.
Overall it's a good start! Can't wait to hear some more from you— hopefully soon with the full version of FL Studio :)
Thanks for feedback! The key signature switch wasn't intentional btw, and yes, i do need to use more instruments. luckily im just about to release a new song in a few minutes that i just finished, and it has more instruments.
oh and im getting Fl Studio Full Version on Chrismas, so then i'll be able to save stuff and work on bigger projects,
drop isn`t all that bad but it is really, would i say bland? yea that`s probably the thing.
But i can see that potential and if you keep this kind of songs up you might improve A LOT
one important side-note is: it doesn`t have any background (chimes, strings etc.)
The drops are missing it more than any other part.
so in one word: improve. Try out FX and different strings. best you cn do is to try out diferent musical styles to find out what fits for you :-)
Thanks for feedback! I agree with that :/ i usually have the most trouble with the drop.